Update environmental-data-retrieval.md

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 **OGC API - Environmental Data Retrieval** provides a family of
 lightweight query interfaces to access spatio-temporal data resources by
-requesting data at a Position, within an Area, along a Trajectory or
-through a Corridor. A spatio-temporal data resource is a collection of
+requesting data at a position, within an area, along a trajectory or
+through a corridor. A spatio-temporal data resource is a collection of
 spatio-temporal data that can be sampled using the EDR query pattern
 geometries.
 
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 ## Summary
 
- OGC API - Environmental Data Retrieval provides a family of lightweight interfaces to access Environmental Data resources. Each resource addressed by an EDR API maps to a defined query pattern. In this deep dive, we provided an overview of the standard and described each of these query patterns in detail.
+ OGC API - Environmental Data Retrieval provides a family of lightweight interfaces to access Environmental Data resources. Each resource addressed by an EDR API maps to a defined query pattern. In this deep dive, we provided an overview of the standard and described each of these query patterns in detail.