better phrasing

COSIMA · Sep 15, 2024 · c7c624d · c7c624d
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diff --git a/Recipes/Atlantic_IndoPacific_Basin_Overturning_Circulation.ipynb b/Recipes/Atlantic_IndoPacific_Basin_Overturning_Circulation.ipynb
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# Atlantic and Indopacific basin components of the Merdional Overturning Circulation\n",
+    "# Atlantic and Indo-Pacific basin components of the Merodional Overturning Circulation\n",
     "\n",
     "Here, we compute the zonally averaged Meridional Overturning Streamfunction in density space in a similar fashion to the [Meridional Overturning Circulation recipe](https://cosima-recipes.readthedocs.io/en/latest/Recipes/Meridional_Overturning_Circulation.html)), except that we partition the overturning circulation into the Atlantic and Indo-Pacific Basins. Strong North Atlantic deep water circulation in the Atlantic can sometimes obscure Antarctic bottom water circulation in the IndoPacific in global zonally-averaged calculations, something we can minimise by the masking procedure below.\n",
     "\n",
@@ -56,9 +56,9 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "You should also set up a dask client. The easiest way to do this is shown here. \n",
+    "We should also set up a dask client. The easiest way to do this is shown below.\n",
     "\n",
-    "Once you've set up a dask-worker, connect to it, click the dashboard link to check worker status"
+    "Once we've set up a dask-worker, connect to it, we can click the dashboard link to check worker status."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -572,7 +572,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "You need to nominate a database - I'm just using the default one here."
+    "We need to nominate a database. Here we use default database."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "Now, let's nominate an experiment. **This script is designed to be robust to resolution, so choose whichever resolution you are comfortable with.**\n",
+    "Now, let's nominate an experiment. **This recipe is designed to be robust to resolution, so we can choose output from whichever resolution we fancy.**\n",
     "\n",
     "We are using here a 0.25° experiment but, in principle, this calculation is independent of resolution and should work for 1° or 0.1°-resolution output."
    ]
@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "To start with, load the bathymetry from your experiment of interest."
+    "To start with, load the bathymetry from the experiment of interest."
    ]
   },
   {